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DO NOT FAV Flash has problems with large files like when viewed saved on the computer, seems when hosted on the internet, the problem is taken care of, so ignore what the directions say if you can see the play button on the bottom. Thank you volunteers for the help in correcting my spelling and grammar! Please feel free to add any advice on things to add! -as long as it’s not more pages XD -or changing the art around on it. -missing backgrounds will be noticed too! same for seeing lines go over into the characters. That’s because it’s still a WIP, backgrounds and lines will be fixed as I color it in. The story is lame and short, I know, but I want to finish and post it anyways! Jubei is cute and a dreamer, Jennie is more experienced and down to earth and Euclase is just hopeless~ Do they seem that way in the mini comic? any advice on speech I should change or add I will listen to! I saved this lined version a week ago, and have fixed some things already. If you see something that isn’t mentioned, it means I have no idea it’s wrong, so do leave a comment and I will fix it!: overall flash -the next and back buttons. They are now invisible, until you mouse over the area, then the arrows appear. -changed all ‘pokemon’ to ‘Pokémon’ page 1: -added in the rest of Spinda in panel 1 since I forgot to draw the poor guy! page 2: -Panel 4 – «total» misspelling corrected. ‘Lose’ changed to ‘loss’ page 3: -nothing page 4: -Panel 2 – «why» capitalized. Question mark after ‘upset’ -Panel 6 – «that» and «wasn’t» capitalized. Question mark after «mean» added. Sailboat corrected. page 5: -nothing page 6: -nothing page 7: -Panel 1 – ‘sorry’ capitalized -Panel 3 – ‘on’ capitalized page 8: -Panel 1 – comma after ‘Look’ added -Panel 2 – ‘?’ added after ‘gym’ instead of period. page 9: -Panel 1 – «o» capitalized. Panel 2 – «eh?» capitalized Panel 5 – «matter» misspelling corrected. page 10: -nothing page 11: -nothing, I want to change Jubei’s last line on this to something less corny sounding, but couldn’t think of anything that was similar to that statement…suggestions? page 12: -last panel-«I bet you have a nice singing voice» change made. page 13: -nothing page 14: -nothing page 15: -nothing page 16: -in first panel, Jen doesn’t finish talking. she’s recalling her pokemon and I couldn’t remember the name of her Gardevoir, now I know it~ -added arrows from panel 3 to 4 and 4 to 5 so it’s less confusing where you look. page 17: -filled the top speech bubble in panel 2, forgot to before. page 18: -nothing page 19: -nothing page 20: -can’t see this page on this file, it’s a credits page. everyone who helps me will be added to it ^^

Categories and tags of the game : Comic, Incomplete, Pokémon, Single Player, Story-Driven